RP Comments

[WishIHadThis]

It won't let me change it back anymore or delete it. :(

Lets just call it OOC.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

uh, I could edit and repost it if ya like...

cuz we definitely don't need this big ole chunk of literary void sittin there. Having to tell people "Pay no attention to the unwanted bit of storyline" will definitely be a BIG bother.

[Vespert]

You couldn't change nor delete it because you were not registered. As such, multiple accounts were created. You just happen to have posted your story with one account and tried to edit/delete it with another one. I'm not sure, but maybe you could try with the computer from which you posted.

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[Vespert]

Doesn't shock me. I often hear that on Hell's Kitchen, as well as "keep the momentum going" or "it killed the momentum".

[Celadon's Penultimate]

No, that line WAS a bit OOC for Ivan, he doesn't talk like that, bt I let it slide cuz it's not too important to us getting along with the story. Other than that, V, how do ya like the story?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I'm gonna add to my part today, and it's gonna be good, so please nobody add too much, I wanna see if I can slide this part in to help to convince the people of the stone's "power"...should be pretty good.

[WishIHadThis]

I finally was able to edit the post and I decided to replace the humor with an action scene with Wayne against an unknown telporter and Flash running from the cops. Hope that this won't mess up the story.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

okay, well, does it coincide with the scene that was already going on?

[WishIHadThis]

Well they both happen more or less at the same time, but I plan for Wayne to escape with no problems, while Flash gets caught.

This should take less than what will happen in the next scene.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Mkay, that actually sounds okay, but ya have to specify, where is this...inside a casino? Or like some other gambling place? You have to tell the folks that it's somewhere else so they don't think you just added a random storyline. I'm gonna do the same thing for my next addition.

Hey wait, I just remembered...I thought that Wayne went off by HIMSELF to go do his scam, or see his friend, or something...maybe he meets up with his friend and does that scam instead of Jack?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Never mind, Wish...like the changes. And I changed some stuff, too so the folks can tell who I'M talkin about too. If ya re-read those two parts, they should go a lil bit smoother now. Thanks for being so cooperative with my section

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

I'm not quite sure where we can go wih it, to be sure...I think for now we basically get the mesa town done...Jack Flash and Pierce Dary scamming people, Jack Ryder (or whoever is in current possession of the stone) showing off the stone's "capabilities", and other things to entertain and excite. We move on to some other place after that.

PS: I vote for the stone being like a brick red

[WishIHadThis]

We need to think of power combinations that can be used to trick people.

Like maybe ....... a multipower superman.

Think about it. Jack on top of an invisible building hoisted by Ivan and Flores. While an invisible Pierce and Nadia "simulate" Jack's cyrokinetic and electric abilities.

I bet it would really look like Jack has multiple powers-such as flying, electro and cyro kinesis, telepathy via Tessa, and  maybe forcefields(invisible wall)

Tell me if this idea sounds plausible if not then defeating a warlord in front of everyone would work too.

However, I could totally see Jack Flash starting a fighting ring scam with help from Pierce Darry though.

Make lots of fake money, fix the results, have people that won win the "fake money" while the real money is with them. They really can't lose either way unless people start going after them.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Yeah, that's kinda what I was going to suggest too. And then when the group is present (not behind the scenes supplying Jack with his multiple abilities), he can pretend like they're being mind-controlled by him...Oh, the possibilities.

I called for a demonstration of Jack's power, which I plan on doing tonight, if y'all can be patient with me...

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