RP Comments

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Mkay, I have started our trek to Brazil. Just wondering who exactly the two teams of our li'l "Superhuman Resistance" are comprised of...one team headed north, and one headed south, and I know a few of the members, but I need the teams to be definitely defined so I can make sure that the story continues smoothly, and I don't have to retcon anything (I HATE redo's)

Not alliances, teams (who's headed with who to where...); been gone a while, so catch me up.

Oh, okay, never mind, got it, thnx

[667]

This is pretty good story you're writing here. Do more!

[Celadon's Penultimate]

mm...okay, glad you like it...hope everybody else does, too.

[spydyr]

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[667]

Well, everyone else was either too villainous or too motivated to take the high road.

But in the description you put for Byne, you noted that he was very well read and kinda introspective. That personality could easy have led to an idealistic worldview and I felt he would make that type of decision that Ben made--so I paired them.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

hope you guys are liking my additions...

[spydyr]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

I kinda like how this group is turning out, too. Didn't think it would turn out good with others trying to play me, but it's actually pretty great as far as I can tell. Hope I can do it justice...

[spydyr]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

well, I'm kinda cobbling something together right now. Take a look-see when ya get around to it...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

hm...wondering...do we have phones in this Superhuman Crisis? radios? walkies? How easy are these things to come across (I mean in general, not in the broke-down mesa town)

[spydyr]

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[WishIHadThis]

Yes, Wayne already got a video call from his agent in getting the job.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Okey dokey...

[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

I think the Geokinetic Gorak was supposed to be much more competent than he turned out to be...not sure why, but it makes for a much more interesting plotline. Maybe the Warlords even know the location of the actual stone or something...

[WishIHadThis]

Gorak=jobber?

That would make more sense, though it was 5 vs 1.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Um, yeah he was kinda a low-level grunt type guy guarding something that's not even that powerful...my guess is, those guys who found it first, the Overlords, knew it wasn't that powerful, and so they sent THAT guy to defend it, to make it seem like it is...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

VERY nice addition, double-six seven, hehe

[Celadon's Penultimate]

You know what, 667? Feel free to add as much as you want, cuz if only me, Wish, bug and you, we're doing pretty dern great...