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[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

No, no I like the criticism you pose, Wish. Like I said, I type this stuff late, so if you notice anything wrong with what I do, feel free to post any questions, comments and concerns.

It's true that Tessa could read the minds of those two, but who says they have the stone? That's kinda the twist I'd be going for if I were to detail a meeting with either of those two...

[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

ha, sorry, I get you two confused sometimes. It kinda registers in my mind that WHD stands for "Wish I Had Dis" sometimes, so I might confuse y'all for each other. But don't worry, I know you are two different folks.

But no really, I like when others help me recognize my mistakes.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

anybody feel free to add on to the story now...I really just wanted to set up for the scams they were gonna be up to. Jack Ryder is gonna use Ivan and his friends to show off the "power" of the stone, and feel free to use any of YOUR characters that may be fortunately in the twon at that time.

[WishIHadThis]

Trying to think what kind of information that Wayne found in the records room and/or what the captured and knocked out teleporter has to say?

Something to move the plot along or reveal something amazing.

My ideas are either

1. The real location of the Warlord's bases-something practical that Wayne would do

2. The identity of the warlord controlling the area-probably someone already introduced to save time and throw a plot twist or someone else

3. The data on the method of brainwashing used on the superpowered police-would kinda explain why Wayne kidnapped the still unnamed teleporter

4. Data on the experiments done on Micky D.

5. Data on superpowered individuals in the area that surpasses Fitz's database

5. Two or more of the above


Still thinking if Wayne should turn them in or not as well, but leaning towards helping Jack's group.....for now.

Also, I think we have enough overlords for now. What we need are henchmen....The overlords aren't seriously thinking of taking on the group by themselves unless you happen to have a broken ability.

I mean, Gorak was taken out fairly easily because there just happened to be the correct combination of powers to defeat him. Other warlords probably wouldn't do the same thing, otherwise the heroes will have it too easy.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

true enough...I think I can dig up some lowly hench guys and gals to put on here. But don't feel like I'm the only one who can post. Y'all add your ideas, too. Don't make me feel lonely, haha...

[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

Haha, NOOO! I am not Dutch...

But, yeah, I like your ideas. I'll get on that tomorrow. Hopefully so will some of the others...

[Zaleramancer]

So....


Need a new warlord to antagonize people sometime in the near-far future?

I have some ideas for one..

Zombie armies... Telepathic Twins Of Terror... Infectious self-replicating belief systems to induce fanatic obedience..

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Ah, yes...perhaps the stats of groups, factions and the like, too...religious zealot groups can just be grouped together by their worldview, their mission, etc.

[WishIHadThis]

Added a Hierachy of Assassins...They can be hired by any group and have no group affiliations and they are all capable of handling superpowered people professionally.

[667]

Imma go ahead and disclose the locations of the warlords.

Just one question--is this Jolyne Isonov or not?

[WishIHadThis]

Jolyne Isonov=cop that was captured by Wayne and Co.

Currently Wayne is trying to find out more about the warlords ie. records stealing

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Yay, and you and 667 finally worked some more power-use into the story...I was drawing a blank, definitely needed THAT, haha

[Celadon's Penultimate]

On another note: wondering who the assassin is. I'd like to try this scene if y'all don't mind.

[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

The part you just added, Bugsy, it's pretty good. Expected at some point or another, but good.

[Ericus Europaeus (Bug)]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

um...why not write it first on like Microsoft Word or something...perhaps some kinda grammar check?