Characters

[Vespert]

@Alex: My post was meant to be satirical. And you might need to re-read your post:
- to me, 9" (with a double prime, as you wrote it) means 9 inches, which is small;
- my mistake about the power confusion, but you did write "Avatar of the Universe", not "Avatar of the Multiverse" as you say;
- and you did make a few spelling/grammar mistakes -- or my English teachers need to be fired -- though I guess most of them are just typos, nothing that proofreading can't correct.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I'm thinking that his grammar/spelling can be excused, seeing as how he possesses a condition that may somehow hinder that...we've all had grammatical errors within our RP so far, anyways, so I wouldn't want to make too big deal of that. I think that it would be only fair to at least figure out Alex's writing capacity. If he can write well, great, we can add it. If he can write in line with what we're doing, great. If he can work this character in somehow, that's great, too. I don't mind having more people added to the RP; the more the merrier, so long as he knows what he's doing, which (aside from the occasional grammatical/spelling glitches) he DOES...

all I'm sayin is give him a shot.

[Vespert]

I agree.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

@Alex: you think you can come up with a sample piece in here to show how the character could be used without being an unfairly-advantaged character?

Yes I can,

If you don't beleave me lets make a deal if I give you a example and that you and the other moderators think is suffeciant he is given a trial basis and if he is not I will try to make another character so do we have a deal or not.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well, personally, I DO believe that you're capable of putting a story together, BUT if that's what you'd like to do, then okay, that's fine, we have a deal...but you have to promise ME something as well...You have to promise that you will use some sort of proofreading software (Microsoft Word or something) to proofread your stuff. I'M not critical of these things, but others MIGHT be, and we don't need to get into any arguments or confrontations (some things people say can be hurtful as I'm sure you know...). I trust that you are a good writier, and I hope that what you post is good, and I'm rootin for ya, so good luck...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

===Character===

Name-- Lillith Vandal-Savage

Nick Name/Alias-- Overlady Vandal, Overlady Savage, the Savage Lady, Mistress Lil (the one she tells others to call her), Mistress, the Corrupter, Sin Incarnate (by her subjects behind her back), Black Eden (by her subjects, behind her back)

=Appearance=  

Height-- 5'7

Weight--134 lbs

Gender--Female

Chronological Age-- 33

Biological Age-- 33

Skin Color--White

Eye Color--Green

Hair Color--Dark Brown

Species--Superhuman (Human Mutant)

Other-- mother is Italian, father is from England, but she has no accent; NEVER goes by Overlady Vandal-Savage; she always goes by ONE or the other, either Overlady Vandal, Overlady Savage, or one of her other nicknames; won't even touch drugs or alcohol

=Psychology=

Likes-- music (almost all kinds; preference depends on her mood), food (almost all kinds; preference depends on her mood), superhumans, movies (horror, romance, action and fantasy), reading (same genres as movie preferences), having people wait on her hand and foot, bossing people around, having people fear her, torturing foes, learning new things, kids

Dislikes-- idiotic people, people who are easily fooled, being fooled, being toyed with, frivolous people, kids that don't like her, old people, being talked down to, disobedience, people who correct her

Phobias-- none she can think of...

Personality-- Her life has basically nothing to do with her dark, demented and heartless attitude toward people; she grew up well-to-do (not rich, but not poor) and superhumans didn't manage to take over her territory until she was 15; but long before then, she was a sadist, a manipulator, a hedonist and, in general, a villainess. Upon discovering her power, things only worsened, turning her subsequently also into a overly-ambitious, power-hungry sociopath. Upon wresting power of her territory, she quickly made her reputation as living up to her last name; her servants are mostly males, and mostly those she finds to be useful or attractive.

=Skills=

Knowledge-- Highly intelligent and cunning; she reads a lot of books, newspapers and intel from various government officials, other overlords and the like. She is fairly decent in math, but her life rarely calls for it, and so she mostly exercises that knowledge just so she doesn't forget it. Also knows the locations of various superhumans, superhuman factions and gangs, as well as the mechanics of assorted superpowers (and thus how to counter them)

Skills-- Getting you to feel comfortable (to put your guard down), getting people to mistrust one another, being charming and witty, lying, intimidation, interrogation, taking a leadership role, fencing, various martial arts (tae kwan do, mixed martial arts, streetfighting, boxing and kickboxing), swimming, tolerating pain, keeping her temper, being patient

Nonskills-- cooking

=Superpowers!=

Power-- Inhibition-Negating Touch (a touch that negates a person's ability to resist impulse; makes the foe susceptible to any compulsion given)

        Sub-powers- Superhuman Reflexes

    Sub-powers- After touching the subject, can decide whether they will obey ONLY her, ONLY somebody else, or her AND somebody else

    Sub-powers- Perspicuity (can dominate others, but can't have the same done to her, though she CAN have her mind read)

    Power Scale-- 9 (she hasn't crossed a mind that she couldn't dominate with her power; theorized only people with Perspicuity or Body Supremacy can resist her power)
   
    Control Scale-- 8 (can activate it by a touch, and can decide to turn it off at will, but it can fail if she feels intense emotion)



Celebrity Claim: Angelina Jolie

I am sorry but my computer won't alow any spell checking and my microsoft word is broken.

I am going to explain this with his basic plot that includes years before it and concludes with his origin story I think it will explain it well.

One day in the multiverse their was a explosion that happened all over the multiverse releasing some kind of hyper mutogenic energy that greatly enhanced somebeings powers though with most its dormant. After the event it was peaceful until one being with the power started to think that the powerfull beings are superior beings to the non powered beings and started to view them as something that should be extenquest through out the multiverse he renamed him self Dark because he would bring the lesser beings darkest hour. He started destroying beings throughout the multiverse and he was succeeding until he made one of the bigest mistakes of his life he decided he should use his power to remake the multiverse one being at a time. The multiverse sensing his threat and knowing Dark had gained numerous followers adapted and gained a temporary physical projection and a mind of its own it knowing only a simular powerfull being could defeat dark decided to someone a person from the multiverse a good yet powerfull person. It acting on its plan summoned the being and explained it to the being who at first did not believe it until the it showed him what was happening and the being unadble to refuse to stop something so destruction said he would stop him but that he lacked darks power it told him the secret of the power that dark had used. The being decided to activate his own power and once awaking it discovered he possed power far great than dark. It changed his appearance making his eyes permantly glowing white lights, turning his hair bright white, and surounding him with a white aura that reflected his out look he renamed himself First because he is the first omong equals and the first being that stood up to Dark. He said to it that he lacked a weapon so it presented him with a crystal that can forge a weapon so powerfull that no only could it harm dark but also be used to channal Firsts power, First forged a long sword with a glowing white blade with a black hilt. First also changed his cloths to a black suit, white gloves, white boots, and an white hooded cloak. First used his power to fight back against Darks army and despite darks army growing more powerfull for cinturys first defeated all of them singal handaly and freed the people Dark was going to kill.

First campain against Dark was one victory after another, first over time managed to convess the people to stand up to dark, First constantly defeated Dark both with power and almost perfect stradagy. First knowing that Dark was still gaining folowers and how numbers might prove a disadantage decided to start recruting folowers of his own, his first recrute was a person from the multiverse, first repeated what it had told it and the being agreed it activated its power and his aura was tan, he renamed himself Daggeron do to him being a master blade wielder in his former life, he forged a black two handed sword, Daggeron changed his cloths to a black suit, tan gloves, tan boots, and a tan cloak. He also asked first whether he could train a dragon due to always likeing them. First said if he could find them in the multiverse he could train them so Daggeron summoned dragons and taimed them becoming the first dragon tamor. First wen't on to train Daggeron until Daggeron was second only to first himself, eventualy their folowers grew in numbers to the point that they equald Darks. First knowing technoligy advancement would help decided to have them use their greatly ehanced intellects to become technoligy and scientificly advanced to the point that their technoligy was seen as near magic even by Darks forces. First also started training his soldiers while Dark in aragence decided not to train his. Eventualy First and his folowers were so disaplend so behond darks forces, militarly, scientificly, and possessing better technoligy that they could finaly end darks threat for ever.

They started a military campain against dark that final ended in a huge confrontion by all the forced Dark hid in his castle and when he was about to enter the battle field to aid his troops was betrayed when his second in cammand came in the room cought dark off gaurd and caused Dark to be stuck in suspended animation in a stone form. His second camand renamed himself Trator due his betraying dark leading to him gaining grate power his power super charged his aura turned pure black his eyes turned red, he changed cloths and wore a black suit, blood red jacket, black boots, black gloves, and forged himself a blade that was a pure black blade with a blood red handle. He entered the battle field said the war was over and that Dark was gone. Half of Darks soldiers attacked him but he effortsly dispached them killing them every other troops sided with him.

Years lator First had dediced to stay in that universe and use it as homeworld and base. He trained everybody in the universe he was in how to use the power, set up a democracy, and its technoligy and science never stopped improving but with advancement came aragance and that brought their downfall. First had neglected to join the councal believing he was better help to the people as he always has been though they convinced him to be a advisor. Though due to the councals aragance dispite first trying to convince them other wise they chose to ignore the fact that Trator and his forces were advancing also. Trator learning from prevous mistakes used the time to improve his fources and himself, he eventual found a dark and distructive yet effective general in the multiverse that he recruited from the multiverse, he told the person about the power and managed to conivince the being to join his side, the beings power grew his powers manifested as a flameing aura of intense flame, his eyes became minituar suns. He chose not to forge a sword instead to forge gauntlets that would act as knuckle busters, he changed cloths and started wearing a black body suit with yellow plates with red and orange fire symbols on his torso, arms, legs and helmet that completely covered his head, and his gauntlets being the same color latched onto his covered arms. He became one of the greatest pyronetics in history and his healy advanced to the point he could come back from the dead so he renamed himself Flame Pheonex. Trator also recruted a former rular and sen't him to conquar another universe but he did not tell the rular he was going their just to draw First and his forces away so that Trator could finaly destroy this one. Against First advice the counsal ordered him and his forces to stop the rular who had already conquared the universe he was asigned to not willing to beleave trator could be a threat so First and his forces left for that universe and the counsal sealed their fate. As soon as Trator found out First and his forces were away Trator ordered his forces to attack and the universe cought by suprise fell to Trator with in moments Trator and his forces killed off every man, women, and child. Trator walked right up to the counsal alone the cousal still believing he was no threat ordered him away and trator killed them.

First and his forces haveing defeated the rular in mear moments returned only to find the universe in ruans First knowing this was Trator and his forces fault sen't his troops to deal with Trators soldiers and Ordered Daggeron to stop Flame Pheonex while he confronted Trator alone. First walked up to Trator who has sat in the counsal seats like a thrown and Trator orders his commandos to kill First but First defeated them in one blow, Trator enraged attack first and managed to survive but got knocked back and was nearly defeated. Daggeron had caught Flame Pheonex burning a school and found out that Flame Pheonex had already had killed every incocent person in a mille radias, Flame Pheonex seeing him attack him tried to attack him and grabbed him by the hands trying to crush him but Daggeron simply shredded right threw his arm with his barehands and after a fight managed to overpower Flame Pheonex and knocked him back a yard to the edge of a clith Flame Pheonex responded by shooting flames that tempatures surpassed the sun but Daggeron deflected it back right at him burning him to ash but Flame Pheonex healed back to normal but still weakned fled. Trator seeing his forces could not win this fight ordered his battered and losing forces to leave and they retreated to a pocket diminsion they had created in preperation but before leaving Trator informed First the war is not over.

The war lasted many centuries and it was harder to win than the last one, Trator kept improving himself and his troops and even started trying to find ways to enhance his forces beyond what the power allowed and created numerous monsters that caused many of the monster myths to spring up. The monsters were a attempt to take advantage of humanities fear but while they were successfull with normal people First and his forces defeated them time and again. At once point Trator find out a way for his forces to use a enhanced eyes that not only would alow better perception but would alow greatly enhanced abilities and the first being who wield them is called the First Weilder but he was killed while trying to take out a town by Daggeron another attempted had Trator succeeding in a atempt to create a living embodyment of the death of all living and non living things but when his creation who renamed himself The Monster betrade him Trator survied but rather than ending the creature realest him letting First and his forces take care of it which First and his forces did by defeated the creature and finding a way to transfer its power to a diffrent being who would wield the power for good transfered the Monster's powers to the being and sealed The Monster in Limbo and blocked off all ways out there for trapping the creature. Eventualy Trator managed to use one of forces forces who were brothers who were powerfull and made a good team but had a bitter sybling rivalry do to being equal in everything though one of the brothers was more noble than the other. During a battle Tratur seperated the brothers from each other and managed to convince the less noble brother to join him. The less nobal brother turned up after being missing for weeks destroying a town the kinder brother tried to reason with him but the evil brother now cunsomed by his hatred and angor for his brother would not lission and tried to attack the nicer brother finding no other alternative fout his brother and the their blows sen't them both hurtaly threw diminsions and they haven't appeared ever since. Eventualy Trator managed to get some victorys by getting to universes before first he managed to convince the leaders to side with him only to destroy them once First and his forces were gone, in fact  the war was going back and fourth and Trator even managed to get some get some battle field victorys and has proved to almost equal First. First had a vision of someone eventualy becomeing the Avatar of the Multiverse and finally ending the war. Due to the war lasting so long people were suffering in the Universe that trator had succeeded and alowed them to live only in order to watch them sufer and to act as lab rats for his experaments while the Universes First had saved were getting depressed First wanting to end the suffering knew only one way to end it quick he order his forces to a meating and told them about his vision and told him his plan and asked them whether they were willing to locked themselfs in order to seal Trator and his forces evil away forever and the war would still last because their minds would still carry on the war even physically but the universes would no longer be affected he also told them they would wake from suspended animation once the war is over or someone wakes them they said they were willing to. That night Trator has the same vision First had gathered his forces and marched his forces to the universe where the embodyment of the multiverse would be but found themselfs intercepted by First and his forces who sealed them and themselfs between diminsions in suspended animation first also added safe cards to prevent over evl forces from realising Trator. First also hid the information away hoping no one would make the same mistake as Trator.

That was years ago and people who remember them refer to them as Originals though they keep it secret. A few years back a tyrant found a piece of the inromation the had been hidden and learned about the power and Trator and though no where neer as powerfull as the originals decided to start up a new evil order and release Trator who they hoped would give them glory, wealth, and power but they lacking enough information decided to look for trator in secret they began to call thems selfs the Order of Darkness but after the they almost found it do to firsts traps they were sealed in the fith diminsion aka dreams and cannot brake the barrier and they started planning 12 years.

Alexander had grown up autistic and also with a problem that caused him to have a hard time telling dream fron reality, due to acting sololy on instink he caused lots of problems and unable to tell right from wrong wouldn't stop untill after lots of reading his autisim lessend and he became a quick learner but he also learned right from wrong and being haunted about what he did never got over it and every time he hurt someone incocent or broke a rule became so overcome with grief that he could do little else but be in shock. Alexander lived a relativly normal life getting good grades ect. until one night when during his sleep his dreams were so realistic and Alexander struggle and shock and determantion not to turn back into what he was activated a power greater than the originals and it evolved him into a cosmic being and caused him to be a avatar of the universe and unknown to him at the time made it so that from that moment he had actualy lived a life time throughout the multiverses history because their was no other way the multiverse could survive the process. Alexander woke up into a strange diminsion that seamed to function as his house, and his iq being acceelerated managed to figure out what happen but when he acadently destroyed a universe when he to him first used his power so he wen't  back to his diminsion set up a training room and database spen't time gaining more control over his powers and finding out more about him, he also knowing people would not be conformatal around his true form found out how to change into a form that more resembled his old one only taller and 30 years old.

Unfortantly Alexanders peace would not last his destruction of a universe had realest The Order of Darkness who soon after word started searching for more information on how to release Trator and destroying anything in their way. Alexander found out they were causing much destruction and fealing it as physical pain and not wanting the people to feal the way he had caused years ago he left to confront The Order of Darkness. Alexander transformed into his regular form in order to try to talk to them but when talking failed and things turned vialont he transformed into his true form and overpowered them but they took advantage of the fact he would not hurt incocents and when one of his blows actidently hurt one he stopped in shock allowing them to escape. He left back to his diminsion fealing bad about letting them go and the incedent haunting him and started debating whether to try to kill himself win a voice said that will not be a good idea then Alexander saw a man incased in bright white light he recognized as first due to his lifespan and their for his memorys being extended. Alexander said "Why shouldn't I kill myself this power causes nothing but destruction'  First replied "That was not your foult" "With power comes mistakes you should learn from them and find away to prevent that from happening again" "If you killed your self you will leave the multiverse and everyone in it vulnerable to The Order of Darkness" "Eventualy they will find away to stop you not physical but mentaly" "If you let me advise you I can help you prepare for when they strike, I will be your mentor offering advice when needed" "Alexander asked why don't you stop them your self" First replied "I can do many things but right now I can not do that I traded my ability to physicaly interfere a long time ago when I decided to enter suspened animation to stop a greater evil but due to my powers I manage to both continue the war and help you at the same time sometimes the largest amount of help comes from advice not physical help" "Answer whether you are going to kill your self or not soon because while I can advice you Trator can likewise advise The Order of Darkness" Alexander replied "When do we start stopping them" First replied (After you get some rest we have a long chalage ahead of us" "Also you choose a code name sometimes your true form won't be enough to hide your idenity" Alexander said " I will call my self Mast of the Multiverse" and with that Alexanders story started.

I hope that cleared things up.

Shadowulf1 if this doesn't work our bet essent over I still have until tonight.

[Zaleramancer]

Woooooooooooooow

[spydyr]

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well I still have until tonight to find futher proof.

What did you think of the story?

Fixt some of the erors in the character. I changed his hight to 10' and I fixt it so that it no longer says Avatar of the Universe it says Avatar of the Multiverse and I will check my spelling once my word proccessor is fixt.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

his story is on a more wide scale than we're looking for right now... we have yet to delve into space...IF we do, though, he should have a pretty good shot of showing up. But other than, try to make him a little less, uh, Galactic...

The power weilders arn't based on space their wars are fought in every universe not just one.

How is he galactic?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

the scale is too wide. It's based ALL OVER THE GALAXY, not just on Earth. We're not in space...

Then why don't you simply add another thread to the rp that takes place on a galactic wide scale?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

you do that...just hope the others approve

I actualy did add a thread that takes place in space and beyond.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

are you gonna use the plot you typed in the character thread?