Characters

[Celadon's Penultimate]

mmkay, just making sure I read right...

@ Alex: no offense, but this one cannot be used in the RP. It can be used in ANY story you like, except the RP or any spinoffs/arcs/metaseries of the RP. If you want to include him in ANY story, it must be posted in the "Share your Thoughts, Ideas & Stories" thread, not here. The character profile itself can stay here, but I'm making a memo to YOU and every other RP'er...THIS guy cannot be used at all, in any way, shape, form, fashion or manner (not even vague references that can be traced back to him) for the simple reason that he is a TOTAL Gary-Lou (a perfect male character that is WAY too powerful to be used in any way that can be counted as fair) of the highest capacity.  

 MUCH too powerful...

[Vespert]

@Alex: Correct me if I'm wrong, but Avatar of the Universe isn't that powerful! From the description, it's more like your life is tied to the life of the universe. You will live as long as the universe and you're affected by whatever can affect the universe, and that's all. It's just a form of immortality, though only Timemaster70 will have the final word.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

TimeMaster70 created the ability that one sounds like? If so, then you better HOPE he's lenient with that...

Other than that, though, i still think he's too powerful...I wouldn't want to see that character to be used in the RP.

@Alex: Try making a character that is human, or superhuman or NOT A FREAKIN SUPERHUGE COMIC ENTITY...

[667]

===Character===

Name--Jenna Redhouse

Nick Name/Alias--Jen, Jenny

=Appearance=  

Height--5'4"

Weight--130

Gender--Female

Chronological Age--23

Biological Age--21

Skin Color--Deep Tan

Eye Color--Black

Hair Color--Black

Species--Superhuman (Human Mutant)

Other--Native American descent; has a long scar down the back of her right calf

=Psychology=

Likes--Banjo music (she does not play), friends, cloudy days and storms

Dislikes--Having to swallow her true feelings, being pidgeonholed

Phobias--none

Personality--Jenna is as about as well-adjusted as you can get. No real hang-ups, no excessive inhibitions, no emotional baggage. Has a way of seeing the world through rose-colored glasses however--frequently unable to see her situation for what it is.

=Skills=

Knowledge--a beginner's knowledge of farm machines, physics, and chemistry

Skills--Being the Minion of an Overlord, Jenna can juggle schedules, meals, day calendars, etc--quite the multitasker. Also an expert streetfighter and was a blue belt at 9 years old.

Nonskills--heavy lifting

=Superpowers!=

None.



Celebrity Claim: unknown female

[Celadon's Penultimate]

changed the formerly empty profile space...

[Wish]

===Character===

Name--James Lubin

Nick Name/Alias-- thief, crook, the most obvious thief in the world, Supermask, Mask de Gauntlet

=Appearance=  

Height--5'6

Weight--140 lb

Gender--Male

Chronological Age--18

Biological Age--20

Skin Color--White

Eye Color--Black

Hair Color--Black

Species--Human

Other--A.S.A. (Anti-Superhuman Agency) Agent; When he attempts to steal something he wears his iconic outfit composed of all his (stolen) inventions and his trademark hat; Based on Lupin III and its inspiration the Arsene Lupin

=Psychology=

Likes--Challenges (the harder the system to crack the more he wants to try and crack it)

Dislikes--None(Even when he is caught he finds it a challenge to escape)

Phobias-- His identity being revealed when in his costume

Personality--James Lubin is a phantom thief-the type that declares his robbery before committing it by placing his calling card and has his own theme song which he leaves behind a successful robbery. Surprisingly he is among the best thieves in the world mostly because of his inventions. He is wanted for stealing many inventions that rival superpowers. Is a technical pacifist-might hurt you but won't kill you.

=Skills=

Knowledge--How to steal something, Escape Artistry, Can operate a computer fairly well

Skills--Stealing, Hand to Hand, Slight inventing skill, Making an entrance, Great Artistic Skills(made his own theme song and costume), master escape artist, knowledge on fencing (moderately skilled)

Nonskills--Not being obvious, Getting caught(Miraculously he always escapes)

=Superpowers!=

None-All of his Powers come from his inventions(most of which he stole or inherited)

Notable inventions(Not normal things already invented)

Twin Gauntlet-On both his hands-multiplies strength by 10 also comes with a swiss army function for each finger (Runs on rechargeable batteries)

Personal Teleporter-On his belt-must press it to teleport(takes 1 minute to charge and more if he is carrying something else)

Cape-Allows him to glide and is detachable and bulletproof(This is actually his own invention)

Mask-Nightvision and Thermal Vision enabled;also has a voice changer(Simple modification needs to press the machine to do it)

Antigravity Shoes-allows him to jump higher than normal(Stolen)



Celebrity Claim: Gaspard Ulliel

[Celadon's Penultimate]

nice...whaddya think of the character I made with LL Cool J?

[Wish]

Hmm....I was thinking of someone else when I saw the term Boogyman but right now it looks great.

Maybe he can be introduced with Gabriel Lee and "Skull" because they all have a background with a motorcycle gang.

[Whd]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

@ WHD: thnx, I like making characters that seem believable (even though they have superpowers); I typically go by a person's appearance to determine their powers and their personality...it seems to work for me...

@ Wish: I'll think about it...it's definitely a possibility. If so, I'll need to see how they would get along together.

[Wish]

Can't tell right now but this was my backstory for my two characters

*Spoilers ahead*




"Skull" and Gabriel are both from a rebel motorcycle gang that is anti-Warlordish and they could be considered a mobile country.

"Skull"'s brother used to be the leader and Gabriel was one of his top confidant's-you can say he was one of his top lieutenants.

After the death of "Skull" brother (who is not to be named here) "Skull" was created by the combined conciousness of the two siblings in the sister's body with the brother's power with an extra dash of rage that mixes the two personalities together to create the new persona of "Skull" That's why "Skull" has his own name because their two personas they had before no longer exist due to the sister's power.

"Skull" left the gang in search for revenge and most of the gang broke up into several smaller gangs of which Gabriel leads the gang with most of the core members of the original gang.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

well, I personally like "Skull"...she's already been included in the story, and I like how she was used. However, I don't know if Ray would be part of that gang, cuz he's more of a bad guy gone good than a rebel good guy...he was a real GANGSTER (bad guy, criminal activity, torturing enemies) and as for his affinity for motorcycles, I haven't decided if that's just a hobby or not...but believe me, I'll give it some thought, because it IS tempting...

I thought I made it fair by making it so that if he doesn not either totally focus on the after effects of his powers or doesn't use them at full powerfull would destroy the universe he is in which would cause him great pain but I guess being weak to watar or something is bigger than destroying a universe my bad.

[Vespert]

My first attempt at creating a character, though I don't intend to join the RP.

===Character===

Name--Scott (he doesn't want to say or hear his surname)

Nick Name/Alias--Little sh*t, the Accident (both by his dad)

=Appearance=  

Height-- 5'7"

Weight--140 lbs

Gender--Male

Chronological Age--21

Biological Age--21

Skin Color--White

Eye Color--Blue

Hair Color--Dark Brown

Species--Evolved Human

Other-- Quite skinny and often visibly tired, distressed

=Psychology=

Likes--Loud music, playing the piano, reading, keeping his mind busy from his power and his dad.

Dislikes--Inactivity, his power which he considers as a curse, his dad, people yelling at him.

Phobias--Severe claustrophobia (confined spaces), nyctophobia (the dark) and autophobia (being alone).

Personality--Mentally broken and deeply depressed. As a child, his dad, a very angry and stressed man, frequently insulted and beat him and his mother and he knew exactly how to hit without leaving traces and therefore avoid trouble. At the age of 12, his mom died in unsolved circumstances at her house while Scott was at school and his father was at work. Since there was only person left that his dad could beat, Scott received more beatings than before, sometimes to the point of falling unconscious. It's during his near-death experiences that he slowly started to manifest his power to see ghosts. At 16, his dad died from a ruptured aneurysm. At first, Scott felt relieved... until his dad's ghost came to haunt him. His dad is unaware of his condition and unable to be reasoned with, forever trapped in one of his "bad day", insulting and beating Scott. As he grew up into adulthood, Scott tried to kill himself several times and eventually committed himself to an asylum.

=Skills=

Knowledge--He reads lots of books as a way to keep his mind occupied from his dad's anger.

Skills--He self-taught himself to play the piano on his mom's piano, both as a way to ignore his dad and to exteriorize his despair.

Nonskills--He hates to be alone with his dad, though his attempts at having a social life are thwarted by his appearance, his personality and his lack of experience in social life.

=Superpowers!=

Power--Mediumship, the ability to perceive ghosts. His childhood memories and his own fear towards his dad cause him to have violent headaches and stomach aches whenever his dad beats him in ghost form.
   
    Power Scale--9/10.
   
    Control Scale--3/10. He never tried to shut it off, though he found ways to temporarily ignore his dad's ghost.



Celebrity Claim: unknown male model

[Celadon's Penultimate]

he still has the POTENTIAL to destroy the universe...what happens if he's killed? Will all the energy within him be released?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

why create a character if ya don't wanna use it??? Don'tcha think that's kinda counterproductive?

[Vespert]

I'm not good with writing stories. And this character is kinda doomed.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

why not let US be the judges of that?

Also first of all I did not know that power was on the list and second he is not the avatar of the universe he is the avatar of the multiverse their is a diffrence basicly he way way more advanced than an avatar of the multiverse.

First of all do you realy think the multiverse will end the multiverse is every universe it is not ending anytime soon.

Second of all if a universe actualy is destroyed he feels great pain and he doesn't like hurting anycent people.

You are saying he is short the worlds tallest man was 8'9 and he in his normal form is 10'.

Also his powers are not the omnipowers if he is not carefull he can destroy the universe he is in or cause a blackhole and he feels every destruction in any universe as pain every object, every person everything.

Also he is not everything about me I didn't memtion my crush on shelb webster who thinks I am anoying though he view will change once school starts.

Also sure I made him simular to me but thats only because I have trouble roleplaying things that are not simular to me.

I basicly made him a slightly weakend version of my ideal version of myself.

Also what is wrong with my spelling I have past english all my life with an A every year and I broke the a.r. reading record by getting 889.1 a.r. points which no one has surpassed yet. I also read the entire harry potter series in my first five weeks of school and thats after due to spending most of my life with worst autisim until 7th grade I was basicly at everything at 3rd grade level and starting at 7th grade I moved from 3rd grade to top of my glass I even wen't from 3rd grade math straight to algibra one and I am passing it with a high B with straight As in all my other classes. Don't mock my english skills if wern't for my reading basicly letting me speed learn things and giving me a chance to be more functioning I would still be a almost brain dead person playing with his action figures. Don't mock my education it is what has let me improve my life and soon I will be a engineer with it. I wouldn't have been able to do all this without help but my reading sure did speed up the prosess.

I am going to ask you one thing will you at least give him a trial period I know he is uber strong but you will find out if you just let me that he does not have to be a god mode sue and if in that trial period he still ends up one I will create a diffrent character but please at lest give me a chance.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

No one is mocking your English (and if they did, I would DEFINITELY not stand for it  )...

I had no clue that you dealt with autism, but even if I did, I definitely wouldn't mock you for it...I actually think that it's quite productive of you (even BRAVE) to work through your struggle to write stories, and if you want to work with him, it IS possible, but we would need to have some sample of your writing to be read, reviewed and agreed upon, and THEN we could take him into consideration for a character. He would have to prove to not be an all-powerful type, and not totally unbeatable. And even if he ISN'T accepted, like I said, you could post him in the story section and do with him what you want (if you post a story about him in the story section instead of the RP, you could make him as powerful as you want, and wouldn't have to worry about him being unsuitable for the story, because it's YOUR story...unfortunately, though, if you want to role-play, he HAS to fit the requirements). Best of luck to you, Alex...