Apocalypse 3 OOC

[Ericus Europaeus (Bug)]

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[Gentleman Vaultboy]

We are literally right there in the starting area, there would be no shoehorning. You are in a basement, follow everyone up.

[Ericus Europaeus (Bug)]

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[Gentleman Vaultboy]

You were in a basement with everyone else. There are still people on the stairs, everyone else is literally in the next room.

[Ericus Europaeus (Bug)]

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[Mik_Hael]

well, let's see...

name: Rorschev Ivanovsky Koslov
power: Give and Take
appearance: Male, Russian, black hair, pale skin, . eye color, grey - hazel. age 21. Dress: cream sweater, black jeans, white ankle-high socks, black shoes. Previous occupation, Army medic in training/ sniper.

[Mik_Hael]

Give and take: not a list power yet.

Take:

The user gains the ability to teleport any physical object into his/her possession or anything in his possession to any location within his/her area of influence. In order to take or give metaphysical objects such as thought or memory, the subject must be in physical contact with the user. In order to take a physical object, said object must either be in the user's field of vision, or the user must have an exact knowledge of the items location, otherwise a sphere of existence will be taken along with anything inside of said sphere. Any body part taken by the user enters a state of stasis, in which they will not rot or age until attached to a body.

Give:

Anything in the user's possession, that has been taken or has been obtained otherwise can be teleported anywhere within the subjects range. In order to give taken metaphysical objects, one must be in direct contact with the subject. Any body part which is given to a subject will attach and become fully functional regardless of the area which it is attached.any metaphysical item given to the subject is instantaneously integrated into the subject's being
 
Midspace:

 Any item that is given or taken is first transported through something called the "midspace". which is a extra dimensional area of space used by the user to ferry objects through space. Due to this, the size of anything transported by this skill is limited by the size of the users "Midspace". It is possible, for the user to halt the process of "Give and Take" Midway through, resulting in the object being left in Midspace, upon which the user may retrieve the object at any time, however, due to the object occupying a portion of the mid space the size of objects that the user can teleport becomes hindered by an amount equal to the volume of the stored object. Metaphysical items do not appear to affect the volume of the occupied mid space.


statistics relative to mastery of skill:

range

size of mid space

intricacy of telepotation space  

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Don't take this the wrong way, but that seems like several powers rolled into one. It's not just teleportation, but the teleportation of other objects, memory, emotion and sense transfer, and infinite storage.

Seems a bit over the top.

[Mik_Hael]

finite storage.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Regardless.

[Mik_Hael]

define sense transfer. Not exactly sure what you mean by that one.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

The transfer of senses. You said metaphysical things could be transferred.

And again Its quite a lot of powers combined.

[Mik_Hael]

If that's the case then no.

The transfer of a sense in that case would require constant contact with the user as well as basically spamming the ability consistently, although the character could "take" eyes, or tongue, etc. I don't think that it's what your referring to though.

As for multiple powers. It's more one power defined by a concept.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Doesn't really matter how you label it...it has multiple powers in it.

[Mik_Hael]

selective ranged teleportation and storage. Could you please name the ones I'm missing?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Memory Transfer
Emotion Transfer
Object Teleportation
Self Teleportation
Dimensional Storage

That's five.

[Mik_Hael]

___________________________
Memory Transfer                          l
Emotion Transfer                          l
basically the same thing               l______________________
=.= .... unless missing somethingl                                            l
___________________________l                                            l   ___ basic teleportation of objects to onself and to elswhere.
                                  l                                                                l   just with mental concepts added with touch.
Object Teleportation l---------------------------------------------------l
_________________l


Self Teleportation. Actuallly he can't do this. The ability is give and take, and you can't really give onself, so he's stuck there. mostly because he needs a phrame of reference. However he might be able to give his own body parts, other than the head or organs, but I don't really see the good part of that.


Dimensional Storage: Most if not all teleporters use a midspace. going to use night crawler from xmen as an example. In the cartoon xmen, when they were in highschool the little imp was shown to actually dimension hop into another dimension, basically hell, and then reappear in his original dimension, just in another location. My character would just have the abilty to stop his teleportation half way.
 
That's one.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Yes....five in one. That's what I'm saying. Why do you always argue with me? I was just stating that I thought it was a bit OP. Its not like I'm demanding you change it.

[Mik_Hael]

Good point. Guess I don't really need to defend myself every time you point something out. Just trying to quell the wave before it rises this time I guess... You do understand my reasoning though don't you?

from your point of view that would mean Pyrokinesis is 3 abilities in one right?

selective matter manifestation

selective telekinesis

heat resistance

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Well, that's not exactly how I see it.