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[Celadon's Penultimate]

It's difficult even to read?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I just had a hard time getting into it. If I can't get into a story I have to force myself to read it. With so many characters I couldn;t keep track and they just started to get confusing on who was who and doing what where.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 You must have a terrible time with superhero comics, then. They've got characters out the wazoo...

[Marvelous Miscreant]

But they have Amazing character development that makes them stick in your mind. Not to mention the visual aspect that helps them distinguish between each.

[Zaleramancer]

Next monday is my last day of school. I'll be able to have some time to read it again and pinpoint confusing areas.

[Zaleramancer]

Define "All".

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Well, I haven't exactly made enough posts to make my characters' character development AMAZING. Sheesh, gimme a break.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

That's kinda my point. You introduced too many characters too fast. They didn't get enough development and time to stick in your mind before the next one showed up.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I mean everyone who is currently a dedicated contributor to the site.

Zale
Marv
Dryad
Myself
WHD
Vespert
Bug
Jester/Mik Hael
Philote
Shadowulf1
Gentleman_Vaultboy

Anyone on that list who is not already an admin would gain admin status.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

As much as I would like it, I don't need it nor do I deserve it.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Hm...you're right. I obviously need more posts in between introduction of new characters.

I was thinking that might be a problem. Thanks.

I'll try to work on some stuff to fix that...

[Marvelous Miscreant]

If only I had been there at the beginning, I think I would be more help now.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well, there's no reason why you can't be of assistance now.

So, the first part (the Caleb Trelaine Arc) was alright to you?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

What happened in that? I forget.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

When they found the Evolutionist's Stone, got the idea to use it to take down the Overlords, and took on Caleb Trelaine's empire. Tamara and her crew? Ringing any bells?

Seriously, it was that bad???

[Zaleramancer]

When the elemental girl went BOOOM!

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 And obliterafied the bad guy...

[Zaleramancer]

Knocked him way back into the astral plane.

Nearly took of Mister Skeleton's head..

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I only half remember this....maybe its just me.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Ah, yes, good times...good times.

Oh, and speaking of which, that's part of why I'll need your help again.

I have more to add to the previous arc.

So, I'll be deleting a lot of posts (after copy-pasting them to a Word document for safekeeping), and I'll need you to do the same for what posts you made. Then, at the right time, we can place your posts back in the proper spot.

Whaddya say?