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[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'm having trouble getting into this...I don't know why.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Is it maybe not catching your interest anymore? Or does it seem too complicated to get into? Or do you not feel comfortable playing as other characters?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

The last two. I don't think I'll ever fully understand what going on even if I read through the whole thing.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

It's okay.

I kinda figured I'd have to continue it alone anyway. I kinda had a feeling like it was too scattered out; too many storylines going on at once, too many powers and personalities for others to keep up with.

I think I have some major editing to do to make the connections easier.

I'll need some help doing it, though. Would you help at least?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I can try....

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Kay, thanks!

Now all I need is maybe Zale and perhaps GV and a couple others.

This must be a concerted effort.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Hey, just wondering, did you at least understand what all of the story that you read?

[Zaleramancer]

Who dares speak my name?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

More or less....it got really confusing towards the part where cookie came in...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Tis I, the Penultimate, requesting audience with The Zaleramancer.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

What about it was confusing?

Their goal to take out the Overlords was clear, right?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

There are just way too many characters to keep track of.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 I knew all the powers and personalities would get to be an issue.

Well, I had an idea for how to fix the problem, so hopefully in the future, it won't, um...be a problem.

Yeah, this is why I need you and Zale to help me.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

How?

[Zaleramancer]

Granted.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Page 7 marks 667's last RP post. After that point, it's just me posting.

I'm gonna work out a way that links together all posts that are part of the same arc. That stuff, I can do on my own.

I need you guys' help to let me know what you think of the story's progression. Character development, dialogue, continuity errors, spelling/grammar, interest level, fluidity, descriptive quality of the story, etc. Anything that comes to mind, just post it in the RP Comments section (with a link back to the post to which you are referring).

I want to edit the story to make it as clear as possible what is going on and what is planned for the story's progression, and in doing so, also make it interesting and exciting for you guys to read (as well as anybody else who happens to come across this story in their search across the internet).

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I've made clear, in the post prior to this, my request that you, Marv and any other willing participants let me know what you think of the Evolutionist's Stone's progression.

But, I also wanted to shoot you an idea.

What do you think of the idea to give ALL regular dedicated members of the forum Administrator privileges?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I thinks its a terrible idea quite frankly (The admin part) . Giving power to many makes it harder to control. Things are fine the way they are now.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Mmkay, just checking.

One vote against, so far.

So, do you think you'll help me with improving the Evolutionist's Stone?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I don't know...I had a hard enough time reading the first time.