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[Celadon's Penultimate]

Hm, really...wouldn't know by your LACK of commentary...

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

No. No I'm not.

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well consider them tested. And much appreciated, I'm trying to give the story a bit more depth. I stuck on one part too long, so it was getting a bit old. Now, though, I think it'll progress well (as I get better as a writer, and learn how to better develop things, and with the occasional help from others...)

It's all good in THIS hood, lol

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

It's a very new, and as yet undeveloped blog. I need to work on it some...

And as for that last RP post...I'll likely retcon it. I forgot who was in whose groups, and personalities didn't come through so clean, so I need to look over it again.
 
Maybe take a look at it later today or earlier tomorrow, because I'm considering an edit.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

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[Zaleramancer]

I liked the imagery.


As for what happens now....


What do you think?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well, next we head after either Ella Camphrey (Raven Lady) or back to Lillith Vandal-Savage. Oh, and we'll need to set up who will rule in Indiana next; I had kind of an idea for that.

1) Maiden is Overlady

2) Some of the people who helped take down the Mover's place are her bodyguards

3) Virago isn't joining, because she's going elsewhere.

4) Wayne's group heads off to maybe New York...

[Zaleramancer]

I like..


I had some ideas for the villains..

Samantha's internal monologue/thing of her plans.


Roughly, Right now she is going to attempt to persuade any allies or contacts of the Mover to rethink their loyalties. In his current condition, The Mover is less than overtly useful.

Once she finds out about Maiden, She'll try very very hard to gain her as an ally. A reality warper of her power is not someone she'll allow to run around. If she has to serve The Mover up on a silver platter to get Maiden to join up, she will in a heartbeat.

Also, she is looking for foreign Overlord allies. (She has already all but taken over a small territory in eastern Europe.)


Think I can do the villains well?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well, sure. I'm just thinking about something, though. These people will be under TRELAINE, right? Because we already have HER, the Mover in cahoots with her, Lillith Vandal-Savage and Ella Camphrey (CRAP, that's a lot of females...good thing the next one is male...)

[Zaleramancer]

Who said they were allies?

Evil is NOT one big happy family here.


She might actually encourage our heroes to attack the other Overlords. Right now, she just needs time to gather allies. If heroes decide to attack one of the Overlords/Ladies then Trelaine would just tip the Overlord off to the attack and go back to whatever it is she is doing. The longer everyone is busy, the more time she has to plot.  

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Very very true.

I was just making sure, though, because I did say once that some Overlords, although mostly all evil, they do oppose one another. And that's what Samantha's doing, right?

Okay, that's good. Verrrry good...

[Zaleramancer]

I'm reading an evil overlord list.

It's entertaining and evilly instructive.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Oh, that list...hehe, good stuff. I remember that list.

[Zaleramancer]

I will never execute one of my generals for failing to win a single battle despite his best efforts. After all, people make mistakes, and if he didn't consistently deliver results, I wouldn't have promoted him in the first place.

    * The punishment for failure in my minions shall be demotion or dismissal, not execution. As said before, people make mistakes, and killing does not inspire loyalty or encourage new recruits to join.
          o Possibly even a warning not to let it happen again. I will be judicious with that one, but it does inspire loyalty.
    * In a similar vein, my minions shall receive: a good pension plan, health benefits, two weeks of paid vacation time per year, and a good salary. This inspires loyalty and it encourages people to join if the job is a good one.
    * Sometimes a bit of psychological stuff works, let's see the general fail after a bit of Paris Hilton music! Mwa hahahaha!
          o Tsk, tsk. You've evidently forgotten the original list's advisory against evil laughter.
          o Why not just make him listen to It's a Small World, and make all the higher-ups watch through soundproof magic mirrors?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Well, glad you know. Cause after this is written, you'll think she wrote it.

[Zaleramancer]

Before making a wish with a genie, witch, etc., I will make sure I have the following on standby: an English dictionary, an Ancient Sumerian dictionary, a lucky charm a truckload of lucky charms (with the truck made of horseshoes), a decoder, a supercomputer, a law firm, a small platoon of soldiers, a Universal Translator, a time machine, a private hospital, at least five fully-functional babelfish, a complete survival kit (first-aid kit, flashlight, spare batteries etc.) on my person, a wizard, a Bunsen burner, a bunker, a nuclear submarine, a resurrection machine, a bunch of solar collectors and a copy of the script.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Yeah...they tend to be tricky, heh heh...