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[Celadon's Penultimate]

lords of creation is one of your greatest? are ya new to the writing biz?

[spydyr]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

oh...hehe, I knew that...

[667]

Haha, I was thinking "This is a competent group of people, they can work this out probably better than I could."

All I want is Our Heroes, Flegn, Jolyne, and the Diabetic to survive the encounter. That's my only wish in all this. Keep it sweet and short and awesome.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

so, you didn't see the latest addition? That encounter is over for now...now we're back to Jack and Crew for their Texan interlude...kinda

[Zaleramancer]

Anyway, does anyone even think I'm any good... Because honestly, I think I'm mediocre with the story-telling and such..

[667]

Hold up. Are Our Heroes not going through Odessa?

[Hyperion]

I believe the confusion stemmed from this:

When 667 referred to the confrontation, he meant the whole battle that will be Odessa, stretching up through the point when our heroes leave Odessa to go to Chicago, Louisiana, and wherever else.
Shadowwulf thought that 667 only meant the brief encounter and ensuing chase between Archer and Jolyne. As he has already shifted focus back to Santa Fe, he stated that the confrontation was over.
667, believing that Shadowwulf was referring to the entire Odessa scene being over, became confussled.

Hope that clears it up.

[667]

667 totally gets it now.

So the moral of the story is that it's not TOTALLY over yet.

[Wish]

Maybe my last idea wasn't too politically/religiously correct, and if anyone was offended, I apologize. Sometimes I just like blurting out my ideas, and I'm working on that.

However, I still want to go with the idea that there is someone is trying to pull the strings around and that there is a backstory beyond the current characters that affects them all.

If it's okay, I would like to add a section where Jolyne reports to her superiors and they send in another person.

I was hoping that I could borrow Zalera's shapeshifting character for the next piece.

[667]

Man, go ahead and do what you want. And blurting out ideas would be dangerous--if this place wasn't a mecca for strange and foreign thoughts. Sensitivity does play a role in what gets put into the RP, but brainstorming with no limits is what will make it great.

[667]

Hey, Shadowulf, are you done with that post or planning to add on more? Because if not, Imma wrap this puppy up.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

No, I'm done...just wanted to talk a bit on the trip to the train station...don't know why, but...

[667]

Gimme 2 more posts in a row, and we'll be ready to split.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

okey dokey...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Oh, yeah, that post was a good one...a little funny, a little character development, and you even gave the government reason to hate our brave heroes...NICE

        

[667]

The happy emoticon crowd made my day. (Not really; that'd kinda be sad. But it is much appreciated!)

[Celadon's Penultimate]

yeah I really liked that part...think I'll add a li'l somethin' somethin' before you split us off...

[Hyperion]

Freaking hilarious. I almost fell off my chair laughing.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

hehe, thank you, I try...