RP Comments

[Celadon's Penultimate]

yeah, that last suggestion makes sense.

Perhaps Jack and the others kept it secret at first so Caleb wouldn't find out about it and try to steal it, and then they forgot to mention it in all the confusion of Tamara's crusade against the overlord. And then, of course, now that they're about to go separate ways, Jack basically says that he has the stone, and that they should let others, in other territories ran by overlords, know about it.

[667]

Uses it kind of like a Great Commission--"Go out and make me some disciples". I like it.

I really really really want to see one of you to finish this tiny skirmish. Use spaghetti westerns as an inspiration (Mexican standoffs, oneliners, etc.). Hyperion?

[Hyperion]

I'll give it a try, I guess. I haven't seen many spaghetti westerners (never watched a single Clint Eastwood movie, shame on me), but I'll see what I can do. I'll have to look up Archer's character sheet.

[667]

Dude, so did I. I can barely keep track of all these guys.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I try my best to keep track, and I'm pretty good with names and powers, but yeah, it looks like it's up to Hyperion to finish this little ordeal before we move on to Texas for our short little stint there, and then split off to head toward Chicago, Indiana and the adjoined Alabama-Louisiana-and/or-Mississippi territory...

[Hyperion]

Hm... I feel like I remember reading something about Wayne and Archer's history together that I would find very useful for what I have planned right now. If nobody knows what I'm talking about I can do without, but it would mean making a little bit up on the fly.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

perhaps the info you're looking for is in the character profile of either Archer or Wayne...

[Hyperion]

Couldn't find what I was looking for, but I can do without. I just lost about half my progress when my internet crashed, but it's coming along nicely.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

okay, cool, well I can't wait!

[Hyperion]

It's pretty long, but I have to say I'm proud of my first addition to the RP.

In my head, I imagine James Bond music playing at the end.

[667]

This new addition is pretty boss. You got quite a talent for fight scenes.

[Hyperion]

Thanks, they're my specialty :D

[Celadon's Penultimate]

working on the next post...should be done in a lil bit...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

DONE! Mentioned the stone! Got them outta there! Headed to Odessa!

[Hyperion]

Anybody mind if I introduce one of my characters in the next post or two? (It's this one.)

I'm thinking that he would have been one of the prisoners beneath Trelaine Manor, who after seeing the Evolutionist's Stone decides to go with them to Odessa and on to Chicago.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

please don't make him a Gary-Lou...if he can call forth his undivine father to annihilate enemies, or something crazy like that, it will have to be revised or deleted...I also ask that you please change his species to human-Demon Hybrid or Half-Demon, like Jack Ryder...fallen angel makes people think of the Bible, and while that in itself is not a bad thing, some people don't know what a "Fallen Angel" is...

Other than that, you gotta ask the others to review your profile once more, and agree that he's okay to use.

PS: what do you think of my latest addition to the RP?

[Hyperion]

Sure, I'll change his race. And don't worry, I've done a decent amount of online RP'ing and I know how to avoid making a Gary Lou.

As for your post, it was really good, especially for something that you had to throw together because we realized we had been leaving out a major plot point. I personally thought that the idea of having Nadia make it snow was excellent.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

thanks...



and personally you have my vote to be able to use your character (hope it doesn't seem like I wouldn't approve of him unless you complimented me, lol...)

[Hyperion]

Great. Although I was thinking looking back over it, I wrote it to make him sound much, much more emo than he's supposed to be.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

well, whatever changes you feel you need to make, do so, and I'll check it when you say you're done. 667's not on right now, so you'll have to settle with me as a demi-moderator.