RP Comments

[Hyperion]

Arright, that's cool. I await it eagerly.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

@667 speaking of which, wanna start the battle scene? I'm kinda drawing a blank, and I think you'd cover it better. I forget where i gave you the outline of Trelaine's manor, so I'll give it to you when I find it, but I'd really like to see what YOU do with it...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Oh, never mind, it was just a few posts up, lol

and just so you know, I only put the basement first because I arranged the "floor plan" by arrangement in the building. The basement is obviously a story underground, then the first, second and third floors.

==Basement==
The basement is basically just a torture chamber. It is an expansive underground bunker of torment, filled with weapons and torture devices suited to harm people, both human and superhuman (feel free to make up your own special devices or weapons or the like to make it seem that much more gory...also would be a good place for a psychometric to pick up painful psychic imprints, for a medium to encounter a few tortured souls, etc.). As such, it is dark, dank, and smells of dirt, death and blood.

==First Floor==
Okay, I know that it's like a mansion, and the main things on the first floor are the "throne room", the psychic common room and Dane's bedroom. You walk down the hall, and to your right is the throne room. Across the hall from the throne room, to the right is the psychic common room, the room where Caleb's psychics meet, and wait until called forth by Caleb to report any revelations they receive. Next door down the hall on the right is the kitchen, which leads to the large dining room. Down the HALL, and around the corner from Caleb's throne room is Dane's bedroom. Dane's Room: at least one bad of weed, a few matchbooks and at least a FEW porn mags laying around, as well as a game system with controllers...

==Second Floor==
On the second floor there's the War Room and a few bedrooms, including Caleb's master bedroom. Caleb's master bedroom is in the center of this story, and cannot be reached through any of the other bedrooms (on one side of the hall, a wall of Caleb's bedroom, on the other side, a bedroom). The War Room is directly across the hall from Caleb's bedroom (on the right, if looking at a floor plan). The War Room is guarded at all times by two superhumans, and the guards change shifts every two hours, ON THE DOT. Inside, there are cameras and guards at each corner of the room, and there is a large, long metal table for drawing out plans and such. There is also a long whiteboard, a holographic projection map built into the table, and the like.

==Third Floor==
Third floor is really just a few towers at each corner of the mansion that the Trelaine Brothers retreat to for solitude. A panic room, a peaceful retreat, a place to stave off intruders, what have you.

Other than that feel free to make up stuff to embellish the awesomeness of Caleb's evil overlord bachelor pad of doom...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

could somebody draw up and post a map of Trelaine's floor plans based on these descriptions? I don't have "Paint" on this computer...

[667]

Check your email. I sent you something pertaining to it.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

well, I would like to see a map, but I don't think the absence of the map will keep me from writing. I'll just go by the description I have...should be pretty okay, I think

[667]

My post is pretty short, but I'll follow it up to be fair.

[667]

My post is pretty short, but I'll follow it up to be fair.

[667]

My post is pretty short, but I'll follow it up to be fair.

[667]

My post is pretty short, but I'll follow it up to be fair.

[667]

My post is pretty short, but I'll follow it up to be fair.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

so YOU'RE taking the next post, to be sure?

[667]

Dude, I don't know where you're going with the gas masks. This'll have to be you.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

actually, don't worry about that right now, the importance of that comes along later. It's a very minor part, believe me. I'll give you a hint: When you get up to the tower where Trelaine is, I'll take that part...

[667]

SUSPENSE OH MY

Alrighty, time to storm the tower.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

[667]

About halfway done at 680 words. In my defense, I'm rather distracted.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

take your time...

and BTW: how long is this RP gonna last? I hope it doesn't have a time limit on it like Richard, I mean, Hyperion's (no offense to Hyperion of course). I hate to seem like a total fanboy, especially for a an RP, but I think I'd like to see it go on for quite some time. Until we run entirely out of ideas...or until we bring it to a clean, coherent place, where every loose end has been tied up and the like...

[667]

Oh, it's going on for a while. We've got several more cities to visit and some really powerful people to beat before we're even done with the States (ie, where I've stopped planning).

And as for the loose ends, that'll be my favorite part to write.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

OOOHH...so you plan on going outside of the states, too? (If it's hush hush, go ahead and email me, but I really wanna know...)