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[Celadon's Penultimate]

In my post, Tamara and the others were already above ground...

[FlyBoy4]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

okey dokey...the story should be good now...wondering who should take the next post, cuz I wanted to introduce the madhouse...

[667]

I was thinking that most of the crazies would be in Trelaine's detention center.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

yeah, that's what I was trying to set up with my last post. But Fly thought the story needed to be developed a little more before we delved into that. Now that we've gotten to the point of a little character development, should we finish up the food heist and get on to the crazies? Cz my intention was that the place the superhumans took shelter is the Heavenly Vale Asylum for the Mentally Insane (the sign of the building was destroyed, and they're only in the lobby, so they don't realize it yet)

[FlyBoy4]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

nobody should post until you're done with your portion...

[667]

Hey, Fly, where'd you go? Do you want one of us to write it out?

[FlyBoy4]

Actually could you please, 667? Busy with school stuff. Not back yet, but going to this school day-camp for reading that leaves me exhausted and without time this week.

[667]

Oh, you just made me happier than I've been all day.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

So...who's gonna be adding the next part? Cuz If you guys wanna do it, we need to try to get to the crazies before we lose the ideas we have. If you guys want ME to do it, we need to come up with a consensus on what is acceptable, and what isn't...

[667]

I was busy with the marching band. Maybe in other places it's easier than all other sports, but not HERE.

[667]

An aside before I start my second chapter in a row.

Mama McShay (Red Susan) was a ton of fun to imagine. Heck, we could even do a story just about her. She was all of Tamara's determination with none of her issues and just a fair bit of rebellious spirit.

Like I said before, people here are going to die and some of them will have names. It was a tragic death, a horrible death. But I have to say that a story with no pain and no meaningful loss is no story.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I personally think it's fine that some folks die. Even my faceless size-shifter Willis can be offed if you see fit...my only qualm is making sure that everybody KNOWS people are dead, so they don't accidentally show up again in the next posts...

GOOD addition by the way...liked it alot

[Celadon's Penultimate]

@667: Hehe...that last addition...NICE

[667]

You done with this chapter? Because you have a habit of making a post and then editing it to your liking--I never know when you're done. (Not to say it's not a REALLY GOOD IDEA)

[Celadon's Penultimate]

sorry, but I'm nearly done. I'm constantly getting distracted, and I just got some time freed up... please bear with me, hehe, I'm close...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

OK, I is finished...anything I change in that thread now should be purely grammatical...

[Zaleramancer]

By "Stretch time like a rubber band" Were you referring to my character Tock?


Because I would really love it If any of you used her in a story!

Feel free if you want to use her or any of the other characters I made!

 Great job people!

[667]

Dear Zaleramancer:

YES