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[Zaleramancer]

Great!

[Celadon's Penultimate]

@667: love the latest addition...
@Zale: I'm thinking 667 might best deal with Tock, but I'll make sure she'll get good wear with me, too...

As for the story...of course we love how it's progressing so far, no? Otherwise we wouldn't post it...so, I'm gonna add a little more to progress the story on the baddies' side.

[667]

All righty guys, all we gotta do is point these guys in Trelaine's general direction and let fly. I want a BATTLE. This is gonna take two or three posts to finish, some of the resistance will die, some of the palace will die. Me, Shadowwulf, and Flyboy know how the story ends, so let us take that--but until then, let it rip.

[spydyr]

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[667]

Haha, you STILL have people in this, even without Byne! Remember Eugene?

[spydyr]

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[Celadon's Penultimate]

I think so...

@667: who's the muscular guy you mentioned in that last post?

[667]

He's that Quentin fellow. The one with the Accelerated Thinking. He's gonna wanna stick close to Tock and her slow-field.

And Spydr: Oh yeah. Eugene is in this. (PROBABLY stay secondary, though. But he will have a fight scene.)

[Celadon's Penultimate]

okay...well, whoever's up to contribute to the battle scene save me some room. i think it should be at least three part, so at least more than one contributor.

[Zaleramancer]

I can see why.


I can't wait to see this battle.

[667]

We-all working on this, gentlemen?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

I certainly hope so...

[667]

The 667 who reads is literally fidgeting in anticipation and frustration because he wants someone to POST ALREADY--

But the 667 who writes understands that this is a tough thing to do and knows that you should take your time. Make it perfect.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

so sorry...it's not gonna be a long post...UGH!!! never mind. Go ahead and post. The anticipation of your next bit of awesomeness just gave me writer's block...

[667]

Just get us to the palace. Give me an overview or a map or something, start the attack, and I'll be able to complete it.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

um...kinda fuzzy as far as the layout is but I can come up with something quick...

==Basement==
The basement is basically just a torture chamber. It is an expansive underground bunker of torment, filled with weapons and torture devices suited to harm people, both human and superhuman (feel free to make up your own special devices or weapons or the like to make it seem that much more gory...also would be a good place for a psychometric to pick up painful psychic imprints, for a medium to encounter a few tortured souls, etc.). As such, it is dark, dank, and smells of dirt, death and blood.

==First Floor==
Okay, I know that it's like a mansion, and the main things on the first floor are the "throne room", the psychic common room and Dane's bedroom. You walk down the hall, and to your right is the throne room. Across the hall from the throne room, to the right is the psychic common room, the room where Caleb's psychics meet, and wait until called forth by Caleb to report any revelations they receive. Next door down the hall on the right is the kitchen, which leads to the large dining room. Down the HALL, and around the corner from Caleb's throne room is Dane's bedroom. Dane's Room: at least one bad of weed, a few matchbooks and at least a FEW porn mags laying around, as well as a game system with controllers...

==Second Floor==
On the second floor there's the War Room and a few bedrooms, including Caleb's master bedroom. Caleb's master bedroom is in the center of this story, and cannot be reached through any of the other bedrooms (on one side of the hall, a wall of Caleb's bedroom, on the other side, a bedroom). The War Room is directly across the hall from Caleb's bedroom (on the right, if looking at a floor plan). The War Room is guarded at all times by two superhumans, and the guards change shifts every two hours, ON THE DOT. Inside, there are cameras and guards at each corner of the room, and there is a large, long metal table for drawing out plans and such. There is also a long whiteboard, a holographic projection map built into the table, and the like.

==Third Floor==
Third floor is really just a few towers at each corner of the mansion that the Trelaine Brothers retreat to for solitude. A panic room, a peaceful retreat, a place to stave off intruders, what have you.

Other than that feel free to make up stuff to embellish the awesomeness of Caleb's evil overlord bachelor pad of doom...

[667]

Shadow, can you start the fight? I'll go from there if you get us going.

=EDIT=
Oh my, you certaintly have set us up for brilliance. I'll give these guys a speech and then start the fight. Middle section goes to whoever.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

So, you're satisfied with how the two sides are setting up for battle? Then I may need to have a little conference or something with somebody to come up with the start of the battle, if you still want ME to do it...unfortunately, my head is still smoking from that last addition, so it won't come out as easily...

[Hyperion]

I finally finished reading up on the RP and I'm pretty eager to get myself into it. Would anybody object if I were to write the next piece? I'm also hoping to be able to introduce a character of my own...

[667]

Hmm. Me, Shadowwulf, and Flyboy have had an ending in mind for a while that I believe will, quote-unquote, "blow y'all's mind."

BUT afterwards, there's no reason why you can't write one of the sections.