I find that lots of times my conversations run kinda long, but descriptions of scenes go pretty well, so hopefully I can improve on both to make better additions. We can all use some grammar/spelling improvement in my opinion (I notice my flaws always JUST after I submit) but other than that, I like the progression of the story as well...
“…Judge not what a man has done, but judge what he could have done if he was a different bloke altogether. For art thou a leper? And a leper can changeth his spots…” --Rudy Wade, Misfits (Series 4, Episode 8)