Generic (Totally orginal) Fantasy roleplay!

[Philote]

Do you think something needs to be changed?

I think I should be able to maintain being relatively strong depending on how strong I make the potions be. I would be using melee combat as well whenever I'm not using potions or other skills, like a warrior.

[jester_of_god]

three, earth and plant hatees me for some reason.

[Zaleramancer]

If you think it is ok, then it's fine.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Um, Jester's aren't exactly spiritual paragons. Either you take the Jester one, which I'm thinking will be elemental, or you think of a whole new spiritual class power listing (which requires 20 totally different powers).

[Celadon's Penultimate]

No, it can still be four. You just have to work harder to gain mastery of those.

[neogenetica]

Are my Soul Master skills okay?

[jester_of_god]

NO, hates as in No dice, won't listen, like trying to hook up a book to a power outlet, or usiong a plane as a submarine, entirely uncompatable. It's not just a dislike towards me, they've tried to kill me before.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Tell 'em, Zale.

[jester_of_god]

And why are we discussing this, Zale already said no for the most part...althoguh like I said I can work around it within reason.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Hence the requirement of an ability such as Elemental Mastery.

Highest level, you can control ANY of the four elements, even more than one at the same time, as long as there's some of it in range to control.

Though, it is just a suggestion.

[jester_of_god]

...I can see spirits and interact with the remember. If I try to touch their element at an early level, they would kill me.

[neogenetica]

What? I tried to keep it fair and balanced with the level.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Because if you make it more abased (not like manipulation of a whole new element at each new level) then he may change his mind.

[jester_of_god]

...you'll get use to it eventually.


Shadow: I don't know how more base I could have made it, but I should be able to make similiar affects with aura manipulation and asking for a few favors.

[Zaleramancer]

You do know you'll turn into a soul vacuum at higher levels, right?

1 Looks fine.

2... These would be just loose souls flying around?

3.  Same questions as above.

4. So. This would be a soul-form of a weapon?

5. Three stacking abilities. Nice.

6. Hmm. Would you be ripping the souls out of people? That's.. iffy.

7. Area damage spell. Ok.

8. Good. Original.

9 Expansions are nice.

10. Devious, but neat.

11. Interesting.

12. You expand on abilities later. I like that.

13 & 14 are good.

15. You're going around Shadow's defenses? Clever.

16 Good.

17 Stat boosts are cool.

18. Due to level, this one looks ok.

19&20 Also look fine.

Overall, it looks like a charge based system would work well with your abilities.

You gain charges (Souls) to a certain maximum number and can use them to fuel your abilities.

Unlike point systems, this would not return after rest BUT at the same time, you can restore them any time you can gain souls.

[jester_of_god]

...I'm not complaining, but how is that any less powerful than mine.

ON a side note, what if I dump twenty and add a form of element manipultation, or spirit ability copying?

[neogenetica]

2&3: Yes. Basically just ghosts or souls stuck on earth.

4:Souls or a single soul(It will start out as only a single soul) formed into the shape of a weapon or just as a clawed spirit that I swing as people.

6:At the lower levels it's more like drawing out their spirit but at the higher levels it does rip out their soul. However, if they have a strong will they can try to resist and may actually succeed.

Thank you for the compliments. As you suggested I shall go with the soul charge system. Precisely why I steal souls.

[Zaleramancer]

Because no one here is better at abusing rules than you?

@ Neo

Just remove soul stealing, raise the level of soul gathering. Strictly speaking, most planar beings don't have souls. Their bodies and souls are one and the same. So no soul range. Your last two abilites are rather powerful perhaps you could tone them down.


Happy Jester?

Also, if you dump off some of your other abilites, you could have a form of elemental manipulation. Make it 3 normal abilities = one form of elemental manipulation. You'd still have six abilities to play with.

[Zaleramancer]

Sorry. Had to Nerf-bat you a bit.

[jester_of_god]

I didn't ask for you to weaken Neo's ability, and if it's three abilities it's not worth it, I may just have to rework the entire class.