Yay! I love it.
Try to avoid block-of-text thought. Add paragraphs when things get to blocky, and perhaps separate dialogue from the paragraph.
Hello I said. How are you?
"Hello", I said. "How are you?"
"" When a person is speaking is also nice.
But this is great. I love setting enrichment.
“She'd become a governess. It was one of the few jobs a known lady could do. And she'd taken to it well. She'd sworn that if she did indeed ever find herself dancing on rooftops with chimney sweeps she'd beat herself to death with her own umbrella.”
― Hogfather