Lords Of Creation 14 (OCC)

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Also, this....

Scuttle Stones (Divine Servitor)

Perception: 1

Camouflage (Passive) (1): Scuttle Stones appear to be regular stones when still and are not easily identified, even when picked up as they can fold the small legs on their underside to appear as a flat stone surface.

Spying Reflexes (Passive) (1): Scuttle Stones can sense when they are viewed by mortals and will subconsciously cease all movement to allow their natural camouflage to hide them. However, if they feel threatened, they will move again to escape danger.

Flaw

Scuttle Stones are small and lack prehensile appendages and so cannot carry things except in large groups by balancing an object on their backs. Their size also makes it difficult to move over uneven terrain or porous terrain.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Aquans
Children of Water
The Aquans are formed almost purely from water, however like other races they reproduce with two inddividuals of different genders interacting. The difference is that Aquans are equally strong regardless of gender.
Aqueous Body: Being formed mostly from water, Aquans are hard to harm with most mortal means. However, heat, cold, and electricity are especially anathema for all Aquans. Fire can steam them to death, lightning will stop them from keeping their form, and cold can freeze them to the point where they take on too solid of a form.



As of right now, this is what I make the Aquans to be like. If you think I need to change them, then say so.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Interesting, so they're basically water elementals sans a few magical powers.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 For a second, I almost got confused. Veelas are a mythical race, but they count as a Race, not Mythical Creatures here. *sigh* That is...a tad bit brain-hurty.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Only for you big guy....only for you.

[Zaleramancer]

Immune to mortal harm is worrying here.

Unless you intend to go in-depth about a liquid creature.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Its that kind of stuff that has me shying away from the use of immunities in the creation of objects, races or other beings. Immunity tends to be a bit too powerful a power. Resistance is more my speed.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

So anyone got any complaints on my scuttle stones? or would like to point out any inconsistencies and such?

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Yeah, I know...

[Celadon's Penultimate]

They seem okay to me. All they're meant to do is be your deity's emissaries, right?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

They are my DIVINE SERVITORS......in miniature.


So yes, basically.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Mhm, thought so. Don't know why that should be a problem.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Right well....

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Sorry about that. I was typing kinda fast so I didn't notice I did that. I'll be fixing that.

Also, sorry if I keep repeating myself and you're doing this right now, but could you look at Jhella (on page 38, 39 or 40) and the Armored Crustaceans (previous page) and give me your opinion on both, Zale?

[Philote]

They seem like something the Watchman would love to have. They are practically a counter for his watchers. They can spy on anything on land, and they can't be spied on by the Watchman's servitors.

However, they don't really fit thematically with your character, though that is not really a requirement for Servitors.

I'm going to start working on my stat sheets now that I've finished my third prototype that I posted up in the message board.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

It's about as thematic as I can get without making floating Khopeshes....And that's not very subtle.

[Philote]

Add more themes?

Stone Khopeshes, an affinity for camouflage, etc?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

That would take quite a few motes to gain new domains....

[Philote]

Theme not domain.

Gilgamesh is related to Dragons but does not actually have that domain. Po deals with Amber frequently.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Ah, that makes more sense...