Lords Of Creation 14 (OCC)

[Zaleramancer]

The Devourer

Lesser Goddess of Autumn, Withering and Atavism.

Power: 4
Precision: 0
Perception: 2
Presence: 1

Endless Gullet (Active) (4): There is nothing that can't fit in the Devourer's mouth. She may devour any object or entity with a lower Power than her own.

Deities, due to their powers may escape her mouth by using a skill, artifact, miracle or plane to flee before being devoured. A god who is devoured may escape by using a Miracle. Any deity trapped within the Devourer looses one mote per turn, which she gains. Other gods may rescue the trapped god by defeating the Devourer or using a miracle. A god who has been devoured and escaped may not be devoured again for five turns.

Tool Of Office

A rusty and worn plains scythe. Any non-Artifact object or non-divine creature struck with the scythe rapidly age. Once per turn, the Devourer may use her scythe to either suppress the effects of one artifact for a number of turns equal to her Power, or drain one mote from a god she strikes. They may not be drained or suppressed again for three turns afterwards.

[Zaleramancer]

Planes are still the fastest way to go long distances.

Barring them, Mina is probably the swiftest deity. (Unless someone makes a higher, purely speed based skill)

But that's not the real advantage of teleportation.

She can enter and abandon combat with ease, or reposition herself for tactical advantage.

[Zaleramancer]

Don't worry.

It's easier to nerf down.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Ok, thanks, I was just wondering, now I just need to finish making the profiles for my last two deities, Fuujin and Raijin.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'll try bumping them up a bit.

[Zaleramancer]

The same applies for you.

I wouldn't mind if people referenced their stats more in their skills and things.

It makes them a trifle more concretely useful.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Zale, could check each of my gods? I've edited all but Mina and Lily & Kyouko.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Khadai

Major Goddess
Domain: Corruption and Sin

Power: 1
Precision: 3
Perception: 2
Presence: 1

Tempter's Tongue (4)
As the goddess of manipulation and temptation, Khadai is a master in the art of word play. She is adept in making lies sound like the truth, and the truth like a lie. With her words alone, she can flatter or deflate the ego with unnatural ease. In fact, she is so supernaturally convincing in the way she weaves her words that, unless the lie is obvious in plain sight, beings must constantly be on their mental guard when speaking to her, lest they automatically believe her lies.

=Tool of Office=
FellStrike is a black bullwhip, streaked with red. It is incredibly strong, capable of bearing tons of weight, as well as stretching out to great lengths. Though, most potent of its capabilities is its power to shoot red lightning-like energy, which harms subjects according to how sinful the victim is. Naturally, children and animals are immune.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Wulf, you're missing one point in stats and last I checked, Khadai only had the domains that she was created with (Corruption and Sin)

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Raijin, Goddess of the Raiju
Demi-God
Power: 2
Precision: 0
Perception: 0
Presence: 2
Call of the Raiju (2): Raijin can call upon and use the combined might of every Raiju to combat her enemies
===Tool of Office===
Taiko
-Taiko is a set of drums arranged in a circle and connected by several sticks
-By pounding on Taiko, Raijin can create thunder and focus that power to strike at enemies

[Zaleramancer]

Mina seems fine. Nothing really flashy, but unique and sneaky.

Suna's Tool seems a trifle mundane. It makes exploding copies of itself.

Tools should nicely compare to, say, Tridents and Thunderbolts and Aegis-es.

The Core Temple seems rather sad, also. It's huge and immobile. Those disadvantages warrant a decent power. Look at the city of Spectropolis.

Akatonbo is both scary and painful. A weapon that causes intense and debilitating pain as well as blood boiling. Hmm.

Judgement Cross is very specific.

The Twins seem.. interesting. I like their second ability. It seems very useful for a King Under The Mountain moment.

Their swords aren't very frightening. They can already shoot fire/ice.

The Cup is interesting, but could use a boost somehow.

Lightning..

I actually sort of like that one. Hm. Maybe it's just the descriptions.

I'm pondering if your Wall could be a modified Incarnate.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

So, for the Pantheon Leader (ie Uburra-Namall):
-6 points for stats (plus 4 points to start)
-6 points for skills

For Major Deities (ie Khadai, Jassi and Jissei):
-6 points for stats
-4 points for skills

For Minor Deities (ie The Seven-Sin Sisters):
-??? points for stats
-2 points for skills

(For the most part I remember, but I seem to have lost track of some numbers again, if you don't mind...)

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

 Pantheon Leader: 

-6 points for stats (plus 1 point in each to start)
-6 points for skills

For Major Deities:
-4 points for stats (1 point in 3 stats to start)
-4 points for skills

For Minor Deities:
-2 points for stats (1 in 2 stats to start)
-2 points for skills

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 I went by the number of points that 'The Devourer' had, since those two are the same rank. And I plan on upgrading Khadai's domains at the very beginning of the Second Age.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Okay, gotcha.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

As it is though, you should make sure that the stats and domains are accurate for the current status.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Ok, I'll be taking those into account as I tweak them further.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Check it now. I think it's better.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Anyone got a better idea for a tool of office for Von Trapt? I'm rather awful ant making god worthy items.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Fuujin, Goddess of the Tengu
Demi-God
Power: 0
Precision: 2
Perception: 0
Presence: 2
Magic Gourd (2): Fuujin has the power to make what a person dislikes the most appear before them in great quantities
===Tool of Office===
Ha-Uchiwa
-A fan formed from a leaf
-Ha-Uchiwa can be used like a blade to cut objects and beings, when used like a fan, Ha-Uchiwa can create powerful gusts of wind such as a tornado.