Elemental Planes RP Comments

[Celadon's Penultimate]

[Philote]

Update: The colossus heart you are given by the military is a modified colossus heart. It is the source of the portals that bring you to the colossus that is the next threat to Earth. It also has the secondary function of being a behavior modifier. If you choose to do anything that directly hinders the mission then your powers will short out and work in random, sometimes dangerous ways for a moment.

Also, for more information, there are three types of creatures so far in the Elemental Planes:
1. Pure Elementals: creatures of different designs made directly out of a certain element.
2. Elemental Animals: Both normal and odd beasts that have elemental properties.
3. The Colossi: Evolved forms of both the previous types.

Filling in plot holes

[Celadon's Penultimate]

The energy colossus should be freakin' difficult to take on.

[Philote]

Well it doesn't have to be pure energy, the fire one is more of a giant.

Maybe you can help me design that one. I have the next two realms picked already though.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

The Fire Giant/Colossus? ME design it?

Sweet.

[Philote]

Energy colossus Wulf  I posted the First fire one we will be facing a couple pages ago.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Oh...no fire colossus?

But still...the Energy Colossus shall be mighty, mighty...

[Philote]

Making the energy one would be more helpful, You can design the field also or I can.

It would be the fourth realm we get to.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

So...we gonna make actual drawings/sketches of them? Or just describe them in really good detail?

[Philote]

I can't draw, so what I make will just have to be described, If you or marv want to offer your services I won't say no.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Great. I'll try to do some drawing, and I'm sure Marv will at least give it some thought.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

You're right, I will think about it. I'm not good at drawing humanoid figures, but I have been practicing, so I may be able to help.

[Philote]

Notice: Right now I'm considering making it where at every Tenth level you gain a physical alteration to your character causing them to be more like an elemental. This is free and goes along with the skill you would get that level. So you may want to plan according to that and not obtain a permanent physical alteration as a skill before then.

I think it would work best as a permanent addition to your character, but I could also have it as an elemental form you take on at will.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Sounds good

[Philote]

Also, I need some help.

I was expecting a person to have water powers to help with getting water supplies for the team, but that didn't happen. So i need to think of a way to include a source of water into the fire field. What I have come up with so far is that there could be boiling pools of water embedded into the solidified side of a couple stars. Any suggestions?

The fire area for reference:
The area is a field of small stars (About the size of asteroids). One half of each star is burning, while the other looks like solidified lava, making it possible to travel on. There are also pillars connecting the stars made of old solar flares that have solidified. At the edge of your vision, you are barely able to see a blue wall with massive caves that loop through the rock and back to the original area. The area is hot, but only enough so as to be annoying.

[jester_of_god]

............Shove the extra two collosus hearts into an animal or two andhave them act like mascots/walking water fountains/supply sheds.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

How would that make them like supply sheds?

[Philote]

That's kind of funny, I like that.

The only heart left is the water one. If somebody else joins they can be the first survivor of another group adopted into the team.

Would take care of water problem for a couple fields, and could act as a monitor/recorder for military.

What does everyone think.

[jester_of_god]

well let's see I thought hta tlight was left to but okay, the animal would work as a storage closet for food because it could have liquidic body and freeze the water inside of itself turning it into a  makeshift refrigerator.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

so its more like a refrigerator than a supply shed.