Fractured world rp (Name pending) comments/planning thread!!!

[The Junkyard Cat]

Well a descriptions of the neutral side. Hmm you want to know about them in general or something specific.

[Mik_Hael]

Abilities

History

items available to

relation with the two warring factions

environment.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'm rather intrigued by the Tech faction's relationship to sorcerium. It seems like a good addition to help combat the overpowering nature of magic, but it lacks an explanation. I think I understand what it it, but it seems to just kinda be tacked on at the end like a side note.

Perhaps a deeper connection is in order? These are just thoughts.

The Magic Side seems like its fairly well played out. Not much to change since magic is already an idea that has lots to go on.

The Neutral side also intrigues me. How will you combine the two powers to make a balanced grey zone?

[The Junkyard Cat]

The neutral side really more varies within abilities because they utilizes both tech and magic for their community. A unique thing that few have mastered is having mana powered tech. Or even robots formed by scraps and mana.

The relation with the other factions are well... they are kinda looked down upon both societies.

For equipment they tend to salvage what they can from the battles between the two factions.

Originally they were just a group of people gotten rid of for opposing the whole war within the cities. Most were ran out by their fellow citizen. Few left willingly of their own discretion. At some point few rose to lead these people and they eventually made home in an abandon city. Which was then named the City of fifty-two. The neutrals have 5 main authorities. The ace of hearts, diamonds, clubs, and spades. As for the fifth he is a information broker who rarely reveals himself to anyone. He is known as Chesyre.

City itself is a gambling city and the community is tightly knit together. Since it's a neutral area both factions are allow in followed that they obey the rules of the city. Each ace has a set of 12 underlings that work for em so ya.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Oh joy, I do love a good Looking Glass reference.

[The Junkyard Cat]

For creating the origin of sorcerium thats a bit tricky and I'm still trying to come up with that.

As for neutrals anyone that joins it is allowed to make a little character powered both by tech and magic.

When used correctly the mix of the two can be destructive and dam right devastating towards enemy forces. However the draw backs for them take on the fact that because they rely on both they gain the issues of malfunctioning equipment and out of control magic.

[The Junkyard Cat]

A what reference? You got to explain that to me also I got to go family lunch and all.

[Mik_Hael]

Can some of them Use sorcerium?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Looking Glass? Perhaps you know it as Alice in Wonderland.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'm sure I could be of assistance in that matter.

The balance of the neutral faction ses pretty well thought out, but I wonder how you will enforce the dowsides of each power.

[Mik_Hael]

The sequal to Alice in wonderland...or more recently the Looking Glass Wars.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Already got it covered.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

There's at least one. The Ace of Spades Reginald Stern can use Sorcerium extremely well.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'd like to know more about any main figures such as Reginald if that's at all possible.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Ok, I'll give the information that I have.

Reginald Stern - Neutral Side Ace of Spades, Height: 6'10", Weight: 178 pounds, Gender: Male, Classified by Tech and Magic as extremely dangerous

Yvonne Carr - Magic Side City Leader, Abjurer and Spirit Mage, Weapon: Chakrams, Height: 5'2", Weight: Unknown, Age: 16, Gender: Female, Hair: Long and blue in a ponytail

Keith Stone - Magic Side, Ice Mage, Weapon: Two Katana, Gender: Male

Brian Carniss - Tech Side, Psi Power: Technopathy, Heterochromic Eyes: Blue and Brown, Hair: Brown and Short, Height: 5' 3", Age: 20, Gender: Male, Prefers machines over people but can always befound with Sosha

Sosha Smith - Tech Side; Psi Powers: Astral Projection, Telepathy, Mini-Me, Swords of Aging; Height: 4' 11"; Age: 19; Gender: Female; Hair: Black and Short; Eye Color: Brown; Weapon: Plasma Blades; Spends most of her time in a laboratory and uses only stuff of her own design


Is this what you wanted?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

That's exactly what I was looking for. This promises to be a very cool RP. Will we be telling it like a story or more like a traditional RP?

[Zaleramancer]

May the Sorcerium be with you?

[Zaleramancer]

My Precious.. Precciouisss.

[Zaleramancer]

Ah. Interesting.

[Zaleramancer]

What about little homunculus things made from a mage's flesh with their magic?

That was one of the ideas for magical styles I got from seventh sanctum.