The Lords Of Creation (OOC) Part Three

[Zaleramancer]

Also, what kind of boats?

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

Name: The Watchman

Titles/Epithets: The Ghost, The Man In the Mist/Dark/Night, The Grey Man, The Revolutionary, He Who Watches, The Idea

Domains: The Oppressed and Just Causes

Description: The Watchman shows no skin, and a great grey cloak distorts his form. He is always wearing a blank mask. If it where removed, you would find he has no face or physical body.

Goals: To insure the world has Justice, and to protect the meek and the oppressed from anyone who seeks their harm.

Holy Animals/Symbols: The Mask, The Grey Cloak, The Color Grey

The Watchman was not always a God. In the beginning, The Watchman was just an idea.,The Mask, and The Cloak. It was the outfit of choice for a certain revolutionary, A person who cried out to overthrow the oppressive nobles in the name of the people. Eventually, this man was captured and executed, but by then the outfit had been passed on to their successor, and again when the successor was killed, and again, and again, until rumor started to spread of this unkillable man. The people rose up against the oppressive government led by The Watchman, now more than a man. Throughout the course of the rebellion, storied began to accumulate about him, about how he could not die and could kill twenty men with a sweep of his blade, about how he could escape from any trap, and be anywhere at once. He grew from man, to myth, to legend.

Eventually the war came to an end and the leaders of the rebellion sat down to draw up the constitution that would shape their country. What each leader found that night when they returned home was a grey mask sitting on their pillow, a reminder that The Watchman would be ever vigilant, lest they fall prey to the temptation to abuse their power.

The common people began worshiping the vestments of The Watchman, and that prayer birthed a new God. But, all worlds die eventuallay, and so the Watchman wandered the void until finding a new, godless world to defend.

[Philote]

Which part was confusing?

I had 2 from yesterday, 3 for new day and races, then I changed terrain, created hero, and created plane.

And simple couple person boats.

[Zaleramancer]

You know the Undines are going to try and eat them, right?

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

So, Zela, mt guy is fine, right?

[Zaleramancer]

Interesting.

Approved. Go forth and shape the world, Watchman.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

Is there a map?

[Philote]

Aren't they only by your city? Anyways, I was working on that post before I read yours  I'll just let whatever happen.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

[Philote]

Marvelous_Miscreant wrote

Let me know If I've done something wrong.

[Zaleramancer]

Waverider made them. She has no cities.

Wait- Which direction are the heading in?

[Philote]

Weren't you talking about making some city in the ocean, and that was why she created those creatures to guard it?

Undecided location, most likely in several directions to explore and so I can interact with whoever wants to interact.

[Zaleramancer]

She's just crazy territorial.

Basically her thought is thus: "MY OCEAN! STAY OFF!"

[Philote]

I guess I'll have to see what happens

I haven't met her yet anyways

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Hazet made the city not Waverider.

[Philote]

Ok, thank you

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

You're harsh. Those sharks and undines are cruel.

[Zaleramancer]

Waverider is harsh right now. Maybe a tad bit more than I meant, but still..


I tried to not make the three NPC-Gods very nice. Zaya is probably going to do something horrible eventually, Hazet will likely try to take over the world, and Waverider is going to be very very harsh.

These are basically the closest we get to antagonists. One of the problems I observed in the last thread was a lack of interaction and disagreement. People made things. Nations. Races. Places. However, nothing much other than that happened, unless I dropped a huge crisis on the world.

But.. if I add a God(ess) that does things people don't like, or disagree with, then suddenly you have something to do. Suddenly, there's a bad guy to mess with!

Unless someone else has ideas for keeping the thread from drifting to a standstill as everyone loosing interest, like the last time..

[Philote]

I like this, keep doing it.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

 Marv has yet to post the pic of what MY land looks like.

I think it should be more clear if he re-read my post.