Suburban Super heroes: for lack of a better name.

[GreenDay]

I don't know how to quote.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

But when have I ever used a cheesy one liner?

[Ericus Europaeus (Bug)]

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[Marvelous Miscreant]

Okay, but I'm entitled to a cheesy line every now and then.

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[Philote]

jester_of_god wrote

Good, idea, is it a ghost town, or some sort of zombie virus for the population...it's going to take some time to find a good non tacky idea.

Either would be good, i'm not sure which I would like better, there are a lot of different ways you could go with it.

Have the two cities docked next to each other so you could walk to either one, discover something is wrong, same problem somehow causes it to be impossible to lift off, cut off communications, barricade between cities, who knows what else could happen.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

We can't spend all our time thinking of new ideas, lets finish our current problem first.

[Philote]

The current one is going at a good pace since yesterday, hmm maybe i'll post my coming back now

[Marvelous Miscreant]

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'm at a loss on how to solve the Rat problem. I was never very good at diplomacy.

[jester_of_god]

eh, it's too bad that I'm not in this one then. let's see.......have him go off onto his giant speal, try to negotiate for a bit, going onto species brotherhood and all of that jack, have the others in the group eventually become over whelmed...it'll happen, your basically facing an army of hercules with future tech. Then have the Rat king consider what you said and end it with a fight between you and him to defeat. IF you win the rat's set you free and leave, if you loose, they destroy you and take over the city, but instead of having a winner or a looser in the fight. Have a machine that was previously sabotaged by one of the others go critical, causing the base to collapse, before leaving rescue the rat king from certain death, and he thanks you and for saving his life he becomes a companin of the humans probably to return in case they need help, problem solved and not a bad storyline.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Meh, fine.......but I probably won't have him give a huge speech about their motives.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Really Greeday? You just happen to have blueprint and find Arc and know weakpoints....that's just a bit too convienient don't you think?

[GreenDay]

I had been in the control room of the city. My character is paranoid, and picked up a blueprint. He's guessing where they are by the different areas. He ran into Arc because he had followed the noises, so he was nearby. And he dissected several of them. That could help him know a few natural weakpoints.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Still its just bad storytelling to have that much convienience. How did you even know what was happening in the first place?

[GreenDay]

You called me. Caller ID. I noticed there were 2 robberies in the area. I checked them out, and found the trail into the sewers.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Caller ID from a pay phone? Plus just because you went to the robberies dosen't mean you would figure it out.

[GreenDay]

I thought you used a cellphone. You followed a trail into the sewer, and I followed the same one. Not many people call me, so I guessed it was you, as I gave you my card.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

We folowed the trail because we already knew about the rat people...you did not.

[GreenDay]

I put 2 and 2 together. A trail into the sewers at a robbery, and a call I suspect to be from a super. I would know there was trouble, so I came.