College of Magic Comments 4

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Marvelous Miscreant wrote

Remind me again what her's is?

Asoka's Soulsword is named Lilianna. It's made up of a couple thousand lily petals and can teleport its wielder (Asoka) from any of its petals to another of its petals.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Sure, go nuts. So long as nobody else objects.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

I don't on the basis that it would make an awesome Stand power.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

That reminds me that I still need to read Jojo's Bizarre Adventures. It sounds interesting.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

If you're thinking of it try and download the newer scanlations of parts 3, 4, and 5. Part 3 was badly scanned, part 4 had an obviously bad translation, and part 5 had a deceptively bad translation.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

I... I see. Any other tips?

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

The first two parts don't have Stands and are really more like Fist of the North Star in England with Vampires. These two, though, have an awesome animated adaptation and introduce you to the best Joestar, Joseph Joestar, along with Dio, one of the most iconic manga villains of all time.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Sorry, for my long pauses in posts. Things aren't coming together as I planned (nobody's fault) and I'm trying to work out the best possible course of actions that leaves the fewest plot holes without feeling like its being forced.

I still have to cover:

Possible deaths of each Acolyte
The origin of the Spiders
The Acolytes "inside man"
The final unseen acolyte
The final resurrection/battle
A few miscellaneous plot twists

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Long as I'm posting relevant things, and don't have to be corrected about plot points, or change my story, I'm good.

I've decided to keep things short and simple for now. As plot dictates, my posts will get longer.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Ok, Honesty time guys. How bad are these last posts? Too forced? Not enough description? Seriously, how may I make it better for y'all.

Oh, and in regards to my latest post....how do y'all think my "legal speak" was?

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

Marv, you're doing fine. In all aspects, you're just swell. I can't think of how you could improve. If you're feeling as though your under some sort of time limit until it has to end, don't be. There's no point in not making another thread if we run out of room.

I have a question as well, though. When Billy makes speeches like that, on a scale of one to ten with one being Squidward and ten being Domon Kasshu, how hot blooded does it read?

[Marvelous Miscreant]

I'd say a solid 8.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

No, my fight is somewhere else entirely. Like Bugs.

[Philote]

If thats an answer to my question, then I was asking about your creature, Earthshaker (?). Didn't you leave him where Zauber was and have Billy head out on his own? I was pretty sure that Zauber was still riding him when you left and that he got off him later.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]

He still there. Specifically, it's been instructed not to let any apostles out of that room so it, Gob, and Red are chilling in the doorway.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Gonna start dropping major hints at weaknesses for the acolytes and start winding down the separate fights to make way for the big one at the end.

[Tsubasa & Wen Tien]

Just a note, Lilianna's limit for consecutive teleports is around 50 or so at a time. After 50 it becomes unreliable or Asoka needs to release to a higher stage... which I haven't even put on a drawing board yet.

[Celadon's Penultimate]

Hopefully, I'm not being too powerful or saving myself from damage too much. I mean, Wulf can't fight for crap. So, his fight's basically gonna be either getting hit, or dodging hits, with the occasional blow landed.

[Marvelous Miscreant]

Nah, you're fine. I'm gonna start wrapping up these fights anyways so we can move on.

[Gentleman Vaultboy]